Chapter 37: sideshow
The new article from the extravaganza
Gu Xiang now sleeps irregularly every day, not sleeping well at night, and drowsiness during the day. All Xiao Yi can do is come back from work. Only then will he start coding, the time is not long, and the updates are irregular. He is no longer a lonely lamp that keeps changing.
It was very late at night. After Xiao Yi coaxed Gu Xiang to sleep, he came to the study again, sat down, opened the document, and silently stared at the black text on the screen, thinking.
Putting both hands on the keyboard, after two seconds, the knuckles jumped up and down, the text jumped, and line after line of text was displayed on the screen.
The progress of the article has been written that after the two exchanged bodies several times, they finally made an appointment to meet at a hamburger restaurant outside the school, and made three chapters.
Although the general view is that whether an article is good or not depends on whether the first three chapters can attract people, also known as the golden three-chapter rule, Xiao Yi actually does not agree with this view. He has read many first three chapters and it is not too much Attractive, but the plot behind is fascinating enough, the key is to see whether the author's story is really exciting enough, this is the alchemy stone.
Characters, plot, and writing are all indispensable. As a supplement to traditional literature, online literature plays the role of adjusting people's lives for people's leisure. It is almost a joke to learn the truth from online literature. In the early years, the plot and writing had a higher proportion in judging whether an article was good enough, but in today's fast-paced life, it is difficult for the plot to beat the domineering president's writing.
Su Shuang's character is king.
Xiao Yi slowly stopped typing, and calmly examined a large paragraph of words that he typed, pressed the delete key, and deleted it.
It's already Chapter 4, but there are only a pitiful 100 clicks. The introduction is not good enough, the title of the article is not good enough, and more importantly, the Su Shuang feeling of the character design is not outstanding.
As a plot article, the amount of plot in the four chapters is too small, and it has not yet attracted readers who really love the plot flow. If the character design is not so cool, the CP feeling is not strong, and it can't make people scream.
This is Xiao Yi's first novel of pure love. He is a pure-blooded straight man. Although he is a bit obscene, he only has feelings for women. He really can't understand what it would be like for two men to hug each other.
He couldn't help but delete another paragraph.
Not satisfied, not satisfied in any way.
He took a sip of coffee irritably, trying to calm himself down and think about how to write a feeling of love.
At this moment, the door was knocked willfully twice, and Gu Xiang came in with a yawn. She snuggled into his arms, squinted at the text on the screen, and asked, "Are Li Shu and Qin Jin rivals?"
What she saw was that the two were dating three chapters in the burger shop, which was the first official meeting between the two.
Xiao Yi shook his head, "It doesn't count." Gu Xiang yawned again, "Why is the atmosphere so tense?"
"They're both in a bad mood, and they're both angry."
"I feel like the two of them might fight at any time." Gu Thinking, "And look, isn't the rhythm too fast here?"
Gu Xiang put his hand on his arm and led his hand to slide the mouse, "It feels a little overwhelming." "It is indeed a little bit." Gu Xiang also reads some online novels because of Xiao Yi, so now he expresses his opinion from the reader's point of view. Xiao Yi sees that she is a little interested, so he directly pulls to the first line of the first chapter and starts to read.
A few minutes later, Xiao Yi asked, "How is it?"
He was still a little nervous, after all, it was the first time.
Gu Xiang: "It seems, it's a bit weird."
"What's weird?" Gu Xiang: "Does this Li Shu like girls?" Xiao Yi nodded, "Yeah." Gu Xiang: "Then behind him How can you like Qin Jin?" Xiao Yi: "Not many people, don't they actually know their true sexual orientation? Li Shu was not sure about his sexual orientation before."
Gu Xiang: "But this way, to readers It's too unfriendly." "We don't need such a real world, we just want to see two paper people talking about a sweet love." Gu Xiang also likes pure love novels, compared to In terms of romance, she prefers pure love novels.
Xiao Yi was a little stuck by what she said, and said cautiously, "Li Shu doesn't really want to fall in love with a girl, it's just what he said.
" It is best not to show homosexuality in romance, it will be a little weird." Gu Xiang frowned, "Although in reality, there are normal men and women in love, and there are homosexual love between men and women, but novels are different from reality after all. In pure love Heterosexuality is written in the novel, and it is too unfriendly to heterosexuality."
Xiao Yi felt that she had a point, "Are there any other questions?"
Gu Xiang thought for a while with his chin propped up, "Qin Jin should be a taller guy. A cold character, you don't pay enough attention to him, and you lack a sense of abstinence."
Xiao Yi only nodded his head, and he never thought that one day he would ask Gu Xiang for advice on writing a novel. "Why does it have to be abstinence?"
"If a person who is abstinent on the outside is completely opposite inwardly, there will be more contrast. Besides, the abstinence is indeed the widest audience." Gu Xiang's analysis is straightforward.
"For example, if you wear a well-pressed white shirt without any wrinkles, the cuffs are rolled up, revealing a small section of white wrist, and you unbutton a few buttons on the collar, revealing your delicate collarbone, even if I see you every day With this face, I can't help but want to crumple your shirt, tie your hands with a tie, and kiss you in bed." Gu Xiang said and buried his head in his arms, He raised his head and looked into his eyes blushing, "Do you understand? The charm of abstinence." Xiao Yi laughed, "Then do you want to kiss me now?"
"Hey, how can you..." Gu Xiang's lips were caught by him, he tasted it carefully, and the rest of the words disappeared between his lips and tongues.
After the kiss, Gu Xiang thought of another question, "There is another question, who are they attacking and who are receiving?"
Xiao Yi rubbed his head, "Actually, I haven't thought about it yet." Seeing Gu Xiang staring Eyes widened, he couldn't help but explain, "Look, high-cold abstinence-type academic tyrants and unruly academic scumbags, it seems that no matter who attacks or suffers, it's very suitable..."
"It can't be like this. The audience of online literature, especially pure love novels, are basically women. If you can't tell the difference, it will be difficult for people to have a sense of substitution in the later stage, and if the reader is wrong, It will also be very annoyed." Xiao Yi
suddenly said, "You know quite a lot."
Gu Xiang smiled proudly, "I have been watching when I haven't slept well recently. After watching a lot, I have a little insight."
Rubbing her head, "Go to bed obediently and stop reading these miscellaneous books."
Gu Xiang hummed twice, rubbing his little head in his arms, "It's getting late, why don't you go to bed." Since she became pregnant, After realizing that Xiao Yi had indulged her so much, he was no longer afraid of him, and became much more courageous, and became more and more unscrupulous.
Xiao Yi glared at her, "Do you want to sleep or sleep with me?"
Gu Xiang blushed, "You can't do it for the first three months."
Xiao Yi couldn't help kissing her lips, and teased in a low voice, "After a while , you can sleep me well, I'm really happy to think about it."
Gu wanted to cover his mouth with his hand, but he grabbed her hand and pressed it under him, he grabbed her hand fast and slow With the movement of her, the air couldn't help but get hot, Gu Xiang looked down at the ground at a loss, just didn't look at him, but he didn't let her go, he just wanted to stick to her ear and say something that made people blush, " Be good, hurry up." The
night is still long, and Xiao Yi still has enough time to tease the kitten.
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